Edit SSH and Unity OnDemand connection documentation
Two files to edit under 'Connecting':
- SSH Connection
- Connect via Unity OnDemand
Edits to make:
- Change wording for clarity; action-oriented steps, make sure code examples are introduced clearly, use present-tense, clarify headings, etc.
- Consistency; make sure headings are consistent/using the same verb tense, make sure steps use consistent format/language, etc.